Failed S.P.F. (Senryu) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Failed S.P.F. (Senryu)



well baked in the sun
like a chocolate brownie~~
layers slowly peel

© 2016

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Park 19 July 2016

The peeling is slow and irritating. Nice poem

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Kelly Kurt 18 July 2016

I don't use it and I have been lucky so far this year

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