With the wings I have been granted
I do not fly straight up to heaven
Instead I am here watching over you
Although I wish I never knew
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I LOVEEEEEEE IT EXPLAINS ALOT OF WHAT IM GOING THREW I DIDNT EVEN HAVE TO READ THE 3RD LINE B4 I KNEW I WAS GOING TO LOVE IT I THINK YOU HAVE A GIFT AND I HOPE YOU KEEP WRITING CUZ UR AMAZING AND HOPEFULLY YOU'LL BECOME FAMOUS ONE DAY
It makes me cry. I don't think about taking my life..but the ones that did...how much they missed...so saaad
this poem was very influencial for me, it reminded me that life truely is worth living and that there isnt enough time to just give up. if you would, comment anyone of my poems that intrest you? !
Fantastic title, emotive content, and some reasonable rhyme and imagery. Well done! S :)
Really nice piece of work, Janay. So poignant, heartfelt. You're so young it's sweet! I am going to read some more of your stuff to really get a feel for you and i promise i will get back to you when i've done so Clare x
really a nice thing to read......and you have shared your thoughts........how beautiful in this tender age you writing........always be positive.........
nicely written poem and very interesting..smooth flow to read the stanzas..good job...10
this is an interesting poem..... wonderfully inconclusive. hey, keep writing friend. thank you.
Reminds me of 'Romeo and Juliet'. Nicely penned.