Sunday, June 27, 2010

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Lost, scared and all alone;
Coldness creeps into your bones.

Fighting desperately to stay afloat;
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Jon ProskeyVigil
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 June 2010

‘Poetic Finery’…abstract metaphor …it is not a sinking poetry...levitatews to keep afloat… thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Taylor Fontaine 27 June 2010

This is really good. I'm glad you up it up. I can really picture everything you're saying in my head.

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