Friday, April 17, 2009

Fading Tears Comments

Rating: 4.5

Like the color of old ragged cloth
My tears fade
Eroded pain washed away like loose soil
Depart my soul
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Elizabeth Jacqueline Mpanga
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Kevin Parkin 08 December 2011

Elizabeth, this is a wonderful poem! You have succeeded with an excellent flow to the poem. You have a beginning, middle and end - not that this is necessary in poetry -but that you have managed to do this in a few lines of poetry, is excellent! Well done!

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Peya Jakob 01 May 2009

This poem is about a happy ending.thanx for th hope.nice write.

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