Friday, June 15, 2007

.......~~~~~~ Fading ~~~~~~~.......Part 1 Comments

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Here I go............ Im fading.........
...fading in to nothing............ Im invible now....
......now all u hear is my whispher.........
...whisphering u should have listen.....
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Jazmine Staples
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Flame6203E . 19 August 2007

plz! ! ! plz! ! ! plz don't fade away plz..........

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here i find myself reading another great poem from you keep up the good work!

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Davidia Kartina 18 June 2007

OMG this is sad like a sad rain or a sad space station or a sad balloon man in the sunset park! ! ! ! im so sorry. Love, DKDAVIDIAKARTINA **********please read and review my poems please ******************

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Madly In Love 15 June 2007

Very sad poem Jazmine..10

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