Sunday, November 2, 2008

Fading Memory Comments

Rating: 4.8

THE DAYS ARE LONGER
THE NIGHTS COLDER
I MISS YOU TONIGHT BUT
EVERYTHING FEELS SO RIGHT
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LUZAAN de Bruyn
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Emily Mackay 10 July 2009

This is really intresting poem short but enough in it to prove what is ment by it. Good work. X

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Angel Smith 16 December 2008

I honestly love this poem, This shows how it really feels to have your heart broken and i know that people think love is all roses and hearts but its also the hard times with the tears and the bleak tears. =) you wrote this really well

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Seems like a love didn't work out i see the heart is sore. Keep Writing can you please read IMAGE when you have some time thank you so much and god bless...

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