Monday, February 11, 2019

Fading Light Comments

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Dwindling light.
Another lonely night.
Another hopelessly moon.
Drowning is the love we had in the ocean of excuses.
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Sunny Nanyeni
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Andrew Eufre Belga 14 February 2019

Or is it “I“ that you are referring to yourself into

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Andrew Eufre Belga 14 February 2019

Good poem..the last line I think you missed some words there

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Sunny NANYENI 01 February 2021

YES, i am going to correct that...THANK YOU

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uthman Ahmad 14 February 2019

All round, a good poem I will like to highlight line 3- “ Another hopelessly moon” Couldn’t get the message there or what it doing in the poem

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Uthman Ahmad 14 February 2019

All round, a good poem I will like to highlight line 3,i couldn’t get the message there.

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