Movement useless like an inanimate object
Emotions stop, gradually fading into time
My heart beat decreases, my soul deteriorates like wood to ashes
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Evy, Great to see you dipping into free verse. This poem shares strong feelings of hopelessness and I like the title very much. Well done. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Morbid......very morbid; I like it. Laters...Joshua.