Friday, September 15, 2006

Fading Into Nothing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Movement useless like an inanimate object
Emotions stop, gradually fading into time
My heart beat decreases, my soul deteriorates like wood to ashes
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Evy Moore
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Joshua Fegley 23 October 2006

Morbid......very morbid; I like it. Laters...Joshua.

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Alison Cassidy 16 September 2006

Evy, Great to see you dipping into free verse. This poem shares strong feelings of hopelessness and I like the title very much. Well done. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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