Saturday, July 18, 2009

Fading Away Comments

Rating: 4.8

In my room I stay
I think of nothing
My surroundings are full
But the space I reside in is empty.
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Jazmin Nakia Blackwell
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Shekhar Joshi 26 July 2009

Well penned.....the ending was surprising....i thought of something else while i read the first part...then all of sudden...there was that suicide thing...... good one..... ;)

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