Fading Away Comments

A poignant write expressing the pain & discomforts in details.... well thought

I love this poem it is great(10+++) ! ! I want to cry but, I can't feel that emotion inside.

your great at writing i read all your other ones and you are great at writing check me out and let me know what u think

In fading away you sprout the fragrance........ fantastic write.........

a poem highly sensitive and emotional by the contrast between this delicate and beautiful human being and cruel world in which lives......10++

This world is a place very lonely and cold Wish there was someone for me to hold Wish there was someone i could trust But i am just like the shadow in the dark The more dark it becomes this is a real fading away feelings, the title and the body of the poem.. both inter linked well.. melodic piece of poem.. heartfelt and soul touching one is this poem..well done..10/10

u hve describe ur pain in very well manner! fading away in dark! ! ! ! ! hey emo girl very well written! !

describez pain so well.....great! ..10++

you really good in dealing with your pain in this poem...you it's really hard to be a shadow in the dark!

****veins not vains pls..sorry for that