Fading Away Comments
The misty evening will be departing soon,
Leaving but a memory of the summer moon;
As the sunlit halls were golden for a day,
Then Sol died of grief in a dusky display!
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You not only write the poem but also paint it with the colours of nature...top marks
WOW! The girl with the golden pencil, shares the gold in her heart and mind, exquisitely! ! !
An awesomely written delightful poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece....10++
The misty evening will be departing soon, Leaving but a memory of the summer moon; As the sunlit halls were golden for a day, Then Sol died of grief in a dusky display! very fine poem. tony
" With the memory of rose" ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
And smoke drifts by, on its mysterious journeys......nice line! Congrats on poem of day!
A poem filled with melancholy. Congratulations on your selection as Poet of the day.
I enjoyed this lovely lyrical poem expressing the flow of life...
A colourful poem! Many congratulations for this wonderful poem being featured as Poem of the Day!
Moments dance by with the memory of rose, It's petals scattering by, as the wind blows; ..........beautiful poem is selected as POD....congrats for being selected this poem as POD.....
Beautiful composition and we'll pictorized evening and imagery of old. Well thought poetry. Congratulations
Witty and insightful quatrains elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, madam.
It was a pleasure, Chuy. So glad you found it calming. Thank you.
Moment By the nano second Gives birth the pearley memory Dawn light to dusk dark Night moon to day sun Sparrow chirping to owl sombering sight Happiness to sorrowful life Hate to love..... Everything is glory of moment... Nano second Some are faded away into abyss of memory Some are enjoying glory
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You seem to be a gentleman and a wonderful poet but please don't be a blind supporter of Robert Murray Smith...It will create negative impact upon your personality..All the best