Friday, June 12, 2020

Fading Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

The misty evening will be departing soon,
Leaving but a memory of the summer moon;
As the sunlit halls were golden for a day,
Then Sol died of grief in a dusky display!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
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Well wisher 15 September 2021

You seem to be a gentleman and a wonderful poet but please don't be a blind supporter of Robert Murray Smith...It will create negative impact upon your personality..All the best

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Indira Renganathan 18 May 2021

You not only write the poem but also paint it with the colours of nature...top marks

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Clyde King 28 December 2020

Well done Evelyn.

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Chuy Amante 28 August 2020

WOW! The girl with the golden pencil, shares the gold in her heart and mind, exquisitely! ! !

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 June 2020

An awesomely written delightful poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece....10++

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 June 2020

The misty evening will be departing soon, Leaving but a memory of the summer moon; As the sunlit halls were golden for a day, Then Sol died of grief in a dusky display! very fine poem. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 June 2020

" With the memory of rose" ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Ruta Mohapatra 25 June 2020

And smoke drifts by, on its mysterious journeys......nice line! Congrats on poem of day!

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Catherine Habbie 25 June 2020

A poem filled with melancholy. Congratulations on your selection as Poet of the day.

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Harley White 25 June 2020

I enjoyed this lovely lyrical poem expressing the flow of life...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 June 2020

A colourful poem! Many congratulations for this wonderful poem being featured as Poem of the Day!

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Mahtab Bangalee 25 June 2020

Moments dance by with the memory of rose, It's petals scattering by, as the wind blows; ..........beautiful poem is selected as POD....congrats for being selected this poem as POD.....

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Varsha M 25 June 2020

Beautiful composition and we'll pictorized evening and imagery of old. Well thought poetry. Congratulations

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Chinedu Dike 25 June 2020

Witty and insightful quatrains elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, madam.

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Chuy Amante 12 June 2020

Calming to the soul, thank YOU!

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It was a pleasure, Chuy. So glad you found it calming. Thank you.

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 June 2020

Moment By the nano second Gives birth the pearley memory Dawn light to dusk dark Night moon to day sun Sparrow chirping to owl sombering sight Happiness to sorrowful life Hate to love..... Everything is glory of moment... Nano second Some are faded away into abyss of memory Some are enjoying glory

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Thank you so much for the beautiful thoughts, Mahtab.

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