Monday, August 27, 2012

Fading Away Comments

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Fading away
In this abyss of darkness
Never knew who she was
How can you trust?
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(De Va) 29 October 2012

once she fades into the peace, she will find the reasons her life was as it was, and take with her the lessons on her next journey...all is not lost in death, but sometimes, it is found. so profound.

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Shivani Misra 27 September 2012

Feel sad for the girl: (but this poem is wonderfull.. U hav penned down your thoughts so well.. I m amazed. :) keep sharing.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 05 September 2012

i love your poetry here. well done.

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It may be just me but fades away into nothingness gives me a strange warm feeling inside. I guess I just feel I know what your saying by she shall be at peace now...anyway thanx for the poem its rich in imagery. I truley enjoyed it

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Shihabudheen K J 29 August 2012

There is little hope left when existence fades away.still my question is who is she

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Valerie Dohren 27 August 2012

Very sad and poignant write - well expressed.

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