Friday, November 13, 2009

Fading Away. Comments

Rating: 5.0

We had reached
such high
romantic places.
But pressures
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Fay Slimm
COMMENTS
Lisa West 27 November 2009

Very nice - I have felt/feel that same way - your poem speaks to me.

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Eyan Desir 25 November 2009

That is romantic and beautiful (^_^)

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Michael Grogan 24 November 2009

Fay, what a beautiful poem, hauntingly beautiful like a freshly mown graveyard with flowers everywhere! my two favorite lines... What reaches the soul stays there, it seems. like an artist you have painted these words While we had time our star burned so brightly. this line is the most haunting...ia really interesting angle.... that love fading, falling, and burning out is about choices made with our time? most poems would have 'While we had our time' as though love coming and going is just fate and we just ride along. looking forward to reading more of your poems!

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Winnie Angel 23 November 2009

True and well written piece! Winnie

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Georgia Girl 16 November 2009

Nothing can erase true love, and you have said it so well here..10

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David Harris 14 November 2009

Fay, this is a sad poem where the words once said it is better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Bob Gibson 13 November 2009

, Love is hurtful, love is pain, love can drive a man insane! promised, practiced in his mind, not like a clock you can unwind! sprung, for life, and promised to, a heart, of truly, but a few those words (I do) say it all, the smallest sentence, ! believe me ! its true

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Ian Bowen 13 November 2009

Fay, well written piece of work.10/10 Regards, Ian

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aww fay. i hope this is creativity... good piece.

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rago rago 13 November 2009

fantastic write....................

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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