Monday, April 23, 2007

Fading Comments

Rating: 4.0

A cold dark village,
of no well known faces.
A moon-lit street,
and deep puddles of black.
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Michael Benfield
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David Taylor 23 April 2007

Michael, that is very interesting I like it. I didn't think the puddles should be red though, it got me thinking along the tracks of genecide and slaughter but I ended up with broken marriages, fathers leaving wives and sons and daughters?

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