Friday, May 6, 2011

Fades Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everything I am
Seems to fade into darkness.
Like nothing around me is real.
As if I stand alone in this fake world.
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Alicia Renea Carpenter
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 May 2011

Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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