Saturday, October 22, 2016

Faded Scars Comments

Rating: 4.9

October blows wind again
Reminscence sorrow to be felt again
Years after years I still have it
Because how can we wipe the tears
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 November 2017

We are like the armies to protect our lives Armies without honored scars on skin Though bullets stick to memories Healed but wounded at hearts still.........yes, no scar still wound at heart. Our faded scars prove us strong and winner. A beautiful poem painted nicely and touchingly and it has been posted here amazingly. Thanks.

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Susan Williams 15 June 2017

Four lines of hard-won wisdom close this insightful poem and these four lines are so fitting for their task. I wonder at those who have no scars at the end of their lives- - are they fooling themselves, hiding their own scars ftom themselves? Or have they floated through life on the wings of drugs? Because even if bad things didn't happen to them they will happen to those around us, those in the news, and these scarred people should affect our lives deeply. Anyway, I digress. Love love love your closure- - - - My faded scars Proved me strong ...I'm more than a survivor ...I'll be a winner

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Unwritten Soul 15 June 2017

Its hard to forget how terrible we stumbled in past, i do feel that pain but i wont consume it as something i should surrender my life journey to be less than beautiful....i still fighting, maybe i have injured much to heal soon but i wont surrender, i just wont even i will be the last one who reach the finished line...in a race of everything wonderful, i just want to have my life...we all be the winners..

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Susan Williams 12 June 2017

Autuminal wind of October With the raindrops in the wind Are tears in my invicible strength And after fall let hold each other hands And let we together stand strong again- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - You definitely have an innate connection with the season of fall. You use its various meanings as a metaphor and you use it well- -like a paintbrush in the hands of an artist.... Thank you for sharing this- -it is well worth the reading and the rereading. Soul, I'm glad you write and share what you write with the rest of us. We are blessed by this.

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Unwritten Soul 13 June 2017

Thank you Susan, i am too...blessed with great friends like you and many others here that heal my unseen wound, i hope i could fade all of my friends secret scars too...so we will live our life confidently...happily..Thank you Susan for your support all the time :)

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Mj Lemon 21 March 2017

This is very profound....Scars and hurts do stay with us, shape our journeys through life, and stay with us in memories. There is also that reminder that physical and emotional harm have in common- -that ability to hand us those scars that pave the way of the journey. A great poem.

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Hans Vr 18 November 2016

Time for joy; time for sadness. I read in this poem an invitation to give more room for sadness, so it can come and leave. If we will not press it or get stressed, which might prevent it from leaving, our feelings are as seasonal as the weather, for us to live through, rather than to avoid. Thought provoking poem, Soul.

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M Asim Nehal 15 November 2016

I would like to quote: Out of suffering have emerged the strongest souls; the most massive characters are seared with scars. By Khalil Gibran... No medal is better than the scars....You nailed the waiting time with scar but with happy ending all pain is gone...Wonderful poem. My Friend Unwritten Soul.....Loved it, Shukriya is behtareen kavita ke liye...(Thx for this wonderful poem)

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B.m. Biswas 06 November 2016

REALLY an optimistic poem I read now...... Few of my like.. Way to hurt is easy and many Not necessary on skin but may be underneath Like a tall hill or hidden valley Hi and low, this feeling it can be that extremes I still survive and much stronger now It just autumn wind wont hurt me anymore Let it only reminds me how strong i was..... you are a MASTER OF METAPHOR....... thanks for sharing.

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Nosheen Irfan 29 October 2016

A very profound write. Beautifully expressed thoughts. Yes, we all learn from our bad experiences n emerge stronger. Though scars are hard to wash away but they teach us a lot. A great piece on man's journey of life. A lovely reflective poem.10

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Unwritten Soul 01 November 2016

Thanks Nosheen :) i appreciate your kind words

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Diane Montemayor 26 October 2016

Dear Sir, Scars are the histories of pains written into ones soul..... There is no treatment except time heals the wounds.. It is simple a recovery.... Beautiful poem... Thanks for sharing sir.... Sincerely, diane

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Christopher Tye 24 October 2016

Really great poem, scars both faded and fresh are a sign of a life lived fully with triumphs and tragedies.

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Rebecca Navarre 23 October 2016

Oh! God YES! ! ! And Yes! ! ! - You Will! ! ! Bravo! ! ! I am Applauding and Smiling! ! ! This is Such A Touching And Meaning Full WRITE! ! ! ! ! ! I am So Moved! ! ! ! Another to Add to my Favorite List! ! ! Thank You Very Truly for Sharing THIS! ! ! You Are Soul! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 23 October 2016

Thank you Rebecca for always being sweet and kind to me and my poem...lets we all be happy in this world

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 October 2016

To wipe the tears! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Muhammad Ali 22 October 2016

Faded Scars. faded, but Scars :) Amazing moments I feel, with wet eyes, smile before HIM. We will fade, but hope not as a scar. the beauty of this poem is the feelings and emotions which are delivered so straight. nice to read.

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Unwritten Soul 22 October 2016

Oh dear Ali, you are so kind and it makes me feel it more :) ..I hope when we fade from earth surface what left is something for others to use and to keep their life beautiful....we are a like one of the chains in a long chain....how we are connected to each other :) When i was started writing it difficult to make straight forward point but now im glad that you say that...so all of you can understand it easily. Thank you dear Muhammad Ali. Stay blessed

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