Thursday, September 25, 2008

Faded Friends Comments

Rating: 5.0

“Friends forever, ” you promised
“Together till the end.”
We did everything with each other
You were my best friend
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Kasi Navadomskis
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Chaotic Life - Curly M. 06 October 2008

wow great poem i love it one of mi favorite

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Michael Fischer 02 October 2008

'Our cheerful music reversed its tune'...memorable line. Overall, a very good piece...I like how you started it with a quote and how it flowed. Good work...top marks! -Michael

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Howard Johnson 29 September 2008

Wow this is a very good piece Kasi, Deep and filled with emotion in every sentence, I even felt a little tear.

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Supratim Chaliha 25 September 2008

You've made me cry today! ! ! Really a deep and sensitive poem! ! 10/10 Keep it up! !

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Joseph Poewhit 25 September 2008

Nothing like a good old friend

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