“Friends forever, ” you promised
“Together till the end.”
We did everything with each other
You were my best friend
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'Our cheerful music reversed its tune'...memorable line. Overall, a very good piece...I like how you started it with a quote and how it flowed. Good work...top marks! -Michael
Wow this is a very good piece Kasi, Deep and filled with emotion in every sentence, I even felt a little tear.
You've made me cry today! ! ! Really a deep and sensitive poem! ! 10/10 Keep it up! !
wow great poem i love it one of mi favorite