Sunday, February 2, 2014

Faded Footprints! Comments

Rating: 4.3

Faded are your thoughts
That once filled your presence in my life.

Faded are your memories
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Akhtar Jawad 18 July 2018

Such a sentimental poem, so emotionally the poetess opens her heart that the reader also becomes emotional. A touching poem.

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Vijay Sai R 20 June 2014

your poem is a pensive soliloquy...and haunting too...

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Lyn Paul 05 February 2014

How quickly footsteps can be buried and new ones need to be formed. Beautiful words.thanks you

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Rajesh Thankappan 04 February 2014

A sense of sadness creeps in when we are nostalgic with a sense of loss. I hope all the faded memories are resurrected with the sweep of the brush. Loved the poem.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 03 February 2014

memories do linger, remnants of the past, bitter sweet.

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Muhammad Ali 03 February 2014

Very lovely theme. I think nothing is faded, but expectations. Nice poem to read

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 02 February 2014

Life is but a passing touch, leaving footprints on the beaches of the earth and the next flowing wave will wash away all the marks is what this poem is.............Geetha...........very well composed

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Savita Tyagi 02 February 2014

Enjoyed your lovely poem.Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem.

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Savita Tyagi 02 February 2014

Such beautiful poem. Loved reading it. The last lines touch the heart. Thank you for sharing.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 February 2014

I always remained faded in your memories What a revelation? Shattered belief is hard to face. Nicely delivered in the poem. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

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