Fade To White Comments

What a beautiful writing! I am glad it fading to white...as i see here many colors on it...just like your poem it's white and colorful...colorful coz white light is combination of 7 colors...and i see you use all of the colors before it fade(not fade..unite!) to be white :) _Unwritten Soul

great style....abso beautiful....and deep philosophical, soul searching too enjoyed thanx...read many times.....dont do often cheers

O man i read it hundred times and everytime i was reading a new poem i dont know what to write it is a wounderful poem. u r using a strong words to express ur imagination wow i like that. good work dear it is just a pice of art and it will never fade.

ohhh god well done and it built in avery beautiful imagery and well expressed...........really iam speechless what a theme mohamed u r the master here

very impressive piece as to affect the reader profoundly in honour of its symbolic imagery, you become lost whilst reading it.

What a great talent! What a rainbow of colors! I am really speechless, or what else could I be? Go ahead! May Allah protect you!

beautiful poem.very well expressed.. Green: in a safety suffering promises A road with no end, And feeling blue in you places And hope gone with the wind. After thinking: Don't be a fool and change the rule That 'White' has always been almight It has a calm safe pretty base With no ugly treachery face.