Wednesday, July 23, 2008

Fade To Grey Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shane and Shay raking leaves in the autumn breeze
oh to be free under the trees in that autumn breeze
Tumbling and falling, scarlet red and amber warm
Shane and Shay in sync with fall
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Ophelia Deborah Payne Jarrett
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Emily Oldham 05 October 2008

beautiful, absolutely beautiful

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Fay Slimm 09 August 2008

How full of pathos and meaning Ophelia. It makes my heart feel the sentiments. I too have written of family loss of different sorts. Hope you can find a similarity with my pieces. One is called A Mother's Plea. Another is titled Release. I would like to know your thoughts on them. You have true appeal in your writing. Hope to see more of your work. from Fay Slimm Corwall U.K.

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Ted Sheridan 23 July 2008

Because you are so nice you are going to make me change the title of one of my most popular poems? Kidding I loved this.

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