Tuesday, July 1, 2008

Fade Far Away Comments

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You don't understand all this pain I feel for you.
These feelings are for real they never seem to fade.
My love for you is dark like shadows in the night.
I keep myself alive with this pain I feel for you.
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Heath Chishty
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Viola Grey 01 July 2008

'My love for you is dark like shadows in the night.' there are more shades to love than the rosy ones most people paint...the strength of this piece lies within the pain...nice work.

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Heath Chishty

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Ada, Oklahoma
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