Friday, July 20, 2012

Fade Away Comments

Rating: 4.5

Let me Fade
But not stray
From the gains I made
Let not those dreams away
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Godfrey Morris
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Leonardo Martinez 11 December 2012

This is a great poem...Strive!

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Oneline Poet 02 August 2012

Very thought out poem...wonderful.

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Dave Walker 27 July 2012

A beautiful little poem, we must always keep our dreams alive.

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Sanjay Mehta 26 July 2012

these seven lines say it all....and between these lines lies the crux of life, good attempt keep it up.

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Valerie Dohren 22 July 2012

We certainly do, otherwise life becomes meaningless - good one

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Maria Fisher 21 July 2012

nice............ we really need to keep our hopes and dreams alive

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Godfrey Morris

Godfrey Morris

Kingston, Jamaica
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