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I’m crippled by the stars that glisten outside the night sky.
-Beautiful.
Burning me with their silver essence.
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'A single star tucked in my pocket.' and '...the stone of his eyes.' Oh yes - a real talent here.
Hi Brenda, I agree with Lillian. You are extremely talented. Great write.10++++
this is lyrical and full of meaning. I can't believe you are only 17. Some poets twice your age cannot make their poems fly this high! Thank you or sharing Brenda.
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7/23/2025 1:20:08 AM # 1.0.0
Wonderful imagery here. Enjoyed this poem very much.