Fade Comments
a void where love was lost... in my heart, a hole
your eyes looked into me, my heart, mind, and soul
you took me into your world, and for a little bit
was I, and a hope that you'd include me in it
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Another deceptively simple-seeming yet deeply complex stunner. That last line - addressed either to the person or to love itself - is hugely clever, too. t x
i concur with Doc, very beautiful, and very sad, but with a ray of hope shining thru. The series of rhymed couplets build up to a strong denouement.
If love shall fade then love shall shine again... Lots of love Roger
This has a rhythm, a beat to it, a pace that is both easy to read and carries the flow along I really do hope that good things will come your way Lee, Love duncan X
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7/20/2025 4:52:12 AM # 1.0.0
A beautiful poem. I like the flow. -Kylie M. Lynch