Fact's Of Life. Comments

Or your lover for a short time, but a friend for life...?

some times words just fit, they form a thought within you and everything begins to make sense......... your poems are as raw as sandpaper. each word is relevant. I have tried in the past when looking for a style to suit me, wrote poems of a similar style, never have I sucseeded as you have. You have found a glove that fits, make use of it. To be honest I am not a lover of reading poetry (even my own) I much prefer writing it...... there are a few poets that I really enjoy, those i do I absorb thier work, you Neil are one of them, for me you have stepped into Bukowski shoes, compliment or not, depending on how you recieve it! ! ! ! ! Keep posting, keep faith, our words are what often keep us from falling. best wishes vincent

You know whats important in life-enjoying it, instead of striving for some sort of acclaim. Great poem.

OK Neil.. Great.. Im a drunk first..! Well said, I feel all four words. Good one