Saturday, May 23, 2015

Fact Of Life Comments

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Every effect has cause and every cause has effect,
It is the fact of life nobody can refuse and react.
Good deeds have good results we do admit,
Evil deeds have evil fruits nature does permit.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Pushpendra Patel 12 February 2019

You have definitely marked the natural law. Every cause has effect. An interesting poem you have presented.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 November 2016

picture of Tim McKee xI know you're hoping to help people. But you will anger others. 24 May 2015 by Tim McKee | Reply picture of eleanor prince xI enjoyed your poem - whilst not all may agree with every detail (womankind cannot solely lay claim to shyness - but this may be a cultural phenomena) . Nevertheless, I like the heart of your poem - it has a certain essential pragmatism highlighting some profound insights. I appreciate your observation that sometimes important truths end up being a matter of common sense: 'As there is creation there is the creator.' Good work! 24 May 2015 by eleanor prince | Reply

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 October 2015

Every effect in life affects us in a way; for positive or, for negative. Nice work.

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Alesia Leach 30 May 2015

a very thought provoking poem

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Valsa George 24 May 2015

Action has same reaction everybody know, Good seeds generate good plants, atheists say no..... Yes, certain things are infallible truths! What we sow, we reap! From grape vine, we can gather only grapes! A poem offering solid thoughts!

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Akhtar Jawad 23 May 2015

What an amazing philosophic poem! ......................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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