Saturday, March 21, 2015

Fact, Fancy And Fate. Comments

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To give up is light, its easy
Keeping up rends you apart, its dizzy
Its worthless chasing a bubble
Bliss is to stay remote from trouble
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Shreej k.c
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Chinedu Dike 21 March 2015

Lovely piece of poetry written with deep of insight in poetic diction. One can only realize dreams that are visualized not ones that are figments of imagination. A beautiful poem well articulated, nicely encapsulated with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Shreej K.c 22 March 2015

Hey Thnks! its a huge encouragement for someone who rarely writes.

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