Tuesday, May 8, 2012

Facing The Harbour Comments

Rating: 5.0

Without roots and prefiguring
the shaping of ferns
bronze bright in the sun cleft
along a wet fault line
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Jill Jones
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MAHTAB BANGALEE 13 February 2022

The harbour is the shelter and the daylight shows the path of future

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 February 2022

viewed as if undiscovered by traffic shouting underneath. Growing is not clinging abiding, travelling daylight....sparkling expression. A marvelous poem.

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Chinedu Dike 12 February 2022

Well articuated and nicely written with vivid imagery.....

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 February 2022

A most deserving tribute to the lowly plant-form, The Ferns.loved it.

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