Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Facing It. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lonely black places engulfing the mind,
Caverns of glistening fear.
Phantoms arising from pleasanter past
Tauntingly whisper your name in my ear.
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Fay Slimm
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Omar Ali Sabar 29 August 2008

I really like this one about loss 10/10

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Ian Bowen 29 August 2008

Fay, very moving piece of poetry. I am pleased that you are aware of the best way forward.10/10 Ian

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Bob Blackwell 26 August 2008

A good description of loss of loved ones and how we must move on to be a whole person again. Bob

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Tom Balch 20 August 2008

Sometimes to move on may not be the right thing at this time.Hold on can also be the right thing to do.dont force it, what will be will be. regards and love Tom

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Shalini Kts 20 August 2008

very emotional....... makes me remember the ones that left me

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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