Saturday, November 14, 2009

Facets Of Love.....Four Comments

Rating: 4.5

in a heavenly scented garden,
the bee of love, slumbers,
in the basking petals
of a tea-rose.
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Ejaz Khan 01 December 2009

A beautiful conclusion, remain that positive! 10

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Raj Nandy 19 November 2009

The facets of love are many, that's true, Youth sees just one or two! The working man perhaps a few more, 'Grey hairs' sees them all in a go! Till God's love embraces him once more! That 'enduring love' let us adore! Ritty, thanks for the entire facets shown through your verse! 10 + -Raj

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