Monday, September 7, 2009

Facets Of Love. Comments

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if love has to go
dont ask him why and where,
nor when to return,
it might slow step
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ritty patnaik
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Raj Nandy 14 September 2009

The facets of love has been concluded well in the last stanza! Involvement of two souls are necessary! But I liked your lighter side of 'chasing and pleasing'! -Raj

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Ejaz Khan 07 September 2009

A true and wise wite Ritty!

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Milica Franchi De Luri 07 September 2009

lovely write Ritty, it's true that the people we love do not belong to us Milica xx

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Saadat Tahir 07 September 2009

ritty ji very nice poem...the well kept and well known secrets of soul to soul entanglement well written cheers

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