Wednesday, June 3, 2009

***************facets Of A Night******************** Comments

Rating: 3.4

Between that sweet taste and your name in her mouth

few moments there were.
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TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
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Heather Wilkins 08 July 2013

very touching and thoughtful poem.

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Chisomo Kumwanje 07 January 2013

Nice poem with unique diction. Read my poems.. Chisomo Kumwanje...

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Antonio Liao 24 October 2012

A DARING STUNT OF REALITY, EXCELLENT IN THE EDGES OF TIME AND POETRY....THE WORLD HAS TO READ THIS KIND OF THOUGHT...10/10

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Sadiqullah Khan 18 March 2010

I have to go through ages in these pages to see what I have written before, if any, Some times it does not matter what is written, what matters is that who has written. You are that (who) here. Add 10 more.

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Sadiqullah Khan 18 March 2010

I have to go through ages in these pages to see what I have written before, if any, Some times it does not matter what is written, what matters is that who has written. You are that (who) here. Add 10 more.

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Rafique Farooqi 27 November 2009

It is very touching and thought provoking write........

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 29 October 2009

Dear TAMARA, Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem 'Facets of a night'. Its a lovely read expressed in exquisite imageries, laced with metaphorical use and superb vocabs that convey much than is apparent on first read and leaves reader to ponder over.. I liked these lines most: 'Yet before we taste any trance in a waiting night the beats' rhymes will be broken by the sun's light' Thought-provoking, profound line of philosophy of life Loved the poem Rated 10 RAJKUMAR

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Kesav Easwaran 29 October 2009

this poem displays a sweet freshness compared to your many other writes Tamara...words fall fresh as dews romantic on the lines of this 'facet of a night'...thanks...10

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Mark Nwagwu 28 October 2009

in the poet's world, each face has many facets - much like Picasso's women with forty faces, each of which is real! this is a surrealistic write, Tamara. The cosmos is not stable - and we are worse, volatile even - thanks Tamara

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Rafique Farooqi 28 October 2009

Wonderful and meaningful poem, i like this poem

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Ying Escalona 28 October 2009

facets of a night sides of a circle... 'outside and inside'

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Seema Aarella 28 October 2009

Oh wow! ! ! ! ! ...excellent lines...last one beats 'em all...! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Marieta Maglas 27 October 2009

wonderful meditative poem, very well written 10 ++++++++++

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Louis Rams 27 October 2009

in the poets universe each face has many facets that tells it all! gr888888t write a ten

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Mohammed Hassan 27 October 2009

it's a real work and you chimed the bell of the truth about that world In the poets' universe each face has many other facets......... you deserve it 10 and even more

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Rajaram Ramachandran 26 October 2009

In the poet's universe how many incidents I am seeing thru' this poem. Well composed.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 26 October 2009

In the poet's universe how many incidents I am seeing thru' this poem. Well composed.

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Nikunj Sharma 26 October 2009

good poem, just watch out for typos

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Nikunj Sharma 26 October 2009

good poem, just watch out for typos

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Sarah Childers 26 October 2009

I really liked this poem! It was written beautifully...+10! !

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