Between that sweet taste and your name in her mouth
few moments there were.
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Nice poem with unique diction. Read my poems.. Chisomo Kumwanje...
A DARING STUNT OF REALITY, EXCELLENT IN THE EDGES OF TIME AND POETRY....THE WORLD HAS TO READ THIS KIND OF THOUGHT...10/10
I have to go through ages in these pages to see what I have written before, if any, Some times it does not matter what is written, what matters is that who has written. You are that (who) here. Add 10 more.
I have to go through ages in these pages to see what I have written before, if any, Some times it does not matter what is written, what matters is that who has written. You are that (who) here. Add 10 more.
Dear TAMARA, Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem 'Facets of a night'. Its a lovely read expressed in exquisite imageries, laced with metaphorical use and superb vocabs that convey much than is apparent on first read and leaves reader to ponder over.. I liked these lines most: 'Yet before we taste any trance in a waiting night the beats' rhymes will be broken by the sun's light' Thought-provoking, profound line of philosophy of life Loved the poem Rated 10 RAJKUMAR
this poem displays a sweet freshness compared to your many other writes Tamara...words fall fresh as dews romantic on the lines of this 'facet of a night'...thanks...10
in the poet's world, each face has many facets - much like Picasso's women with forty faces, each of which is real! this is a surrealistic write, Tamara. The cosmos is not stable - and we are worse, volatile even - thanks Tamara
Oh wow! ! ! ! ! ...excellent lines...last one beats 'em all...! ! ! ! ! ! !
in the poets universe each face has many facets that tells it all! gr888888t write a ten
it's a real work and you chimed the bell of the truth about that world In the poets' universe each face has many other facets......... you deserve it 10 and even more
In the poet's universe how many incidents I am seeing thru' this poem. Well composed.
In the poet's universe how many incidents I am seeing thru' this poem. Well composed.
I really liked this poem! It was written beautifully...+10! !
very touching and thoughtful poem.