Thursday, August 31, 2017

Faces Of Loneliness Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a crowded bar room
Sitting in a dark corner
A lonely man drinks his whiskey
Smoke swirled around him
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 December 2022

I agree with poetess Valsa that ugly faces of loneliness frightens one in the darkness. A brilliant poem dear poetess Nudershada. Top score.

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Valsa George 08 April 2018

Life is predominantly one of sorrow than joy! Loneliness is a feeling that haunts many! During day time each one is busy in one way or other. But as darkness descends, everyone will be retiring to his private world where demons of loneliness and despair attack him! You have beautifully painted a slice of life through many characters who grapple with the problems of life single handed!

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Nudershada Cabanes 08 April 2018

Thanks Valsa for your insightful comment. It is much appreciated.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 March 2018

Phases, faces! Loneliness; looking into her heart. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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