In a crowded bar room
Sitting in a dark corner
A lonely man drinks his whiskey
Smoke swirled around him
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Life is predominantly one of sorrow than joy! Loneliness is a feeling that haunts many! During day time each one is busy in one way or other. But as darkness descends, everyone will be retiring to his private world where demons of loneliness and despair attack him! You have beautifully painted a slice of life through many characters who grapple with the problems of life single handed!
Thanks Valsa for your insightful comment. It is much appreciated.
Phases, faces! Loneliness; looking into her heart. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I agree with poetess Valsa that ugly faces of loneliness frightens one in the darkness. A brilliant poem dear poetess Nudershada. Top score.