Thursday, June 11, 2009

...Faces............... (New Version) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Genetically brushed
Not by the cover
We know the tale
Beautifully crafted
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Eyan Desir
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Terrance Woolridge 25 June 2009

Good stuff man. Bruce lee once said Deception is all

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 25 June 2009

Some People try to please so hide their true face others put on a false face to get something in return - a treasure indeed when you find their true self - well written

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 24 June 2009

DEAR EYAN, GOOD DIAGNOSISE LOVE DOCTOR, BARRING ONE HITCH IN LINE SEVEN IT SHOULD BE PERHAPS'HOLDS HIS' INSTEAD OF 'HOLDER THEIR'. I CAN'T AGREE WITH MR KARIN ANDERSON'S GENERALISED COMMENT THAT'S APPLICABLE MORE TO LADIES WHO MASK THEIR FACES.GENTS AND THOSE INVOLVED IN POLITICS ARE RATHER MORE DANGEROUS. RAJKUMAR

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When pages are turned We unlock mysteries Faces are just masks Masking colors of a heart.... ya double speak and no respect for love......good write i represented trye picture in'Colour' findtime to read.

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Leslie Rodriguez 22 June 2009

this is wonderful poem! and incredibly true. you, are very talented. :) 10++

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physical appearance or outside look doesn't depict the true character of a person...a face full of make up doesn't show a real beauty.. wonderful writing...thanks best regards, jdh

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Pandian Angelina 19 June 2009

Faces are the masks Behind which we hide Our true faces - Which Even we ourselves abhor! Loved your poem, so neat So concise, yet truth, all! Angel

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Julius Luke Victorio 18 June 2009

This poem appeals to sooo many people! All the comments below have already said what I've needed to say: D Brilliant... just brilliant

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Catrina Heart 18 June 2009

As the tale of true beauty never dies...Faces arise! ! !

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Jazzmen Hankins 17 June 2009

I like your poem (more like love) but i don't quite understand it. Could you tell me a little bit about what you are trying to express?

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In Astrology our rising sign is the mask we show to others. How we look doesn't always say who we are. Especially women who paint their faces. 10 Karin Anderson

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Ken E Hall 17 June 2009

A thoughtful poem on an identity subject like judging a book by its cover, a very good subject for a poem...well done regards

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Sally Plumb Plumb 17 June 2009

We'd better watch out what we write.

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Karla Bardanza 16 June 2009

Nice poem.I really enjoyed it1

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I gave it a 10! ! ! ! ! <33Payyton

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Cristy Upshaw 16 June 2009

very enchanting piece. we all have many faces, whether painted or true.

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Luwi Habte 16 June 2009

deae eyan desire your poem is nice i like it thanks for sharing luwi

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L.P. Alexanders 16 June 2009

indeed we can say much by looking people's faces but we cant looking into them, we cannot look at what is inside! beautiful poem I invite u to look at my poems and leave some comments or rate them regards

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Giselle Joseph 16 June 2009

Great job I really enjoyed the metaphor.

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Marieta Maglas 16 June 2009

wonderful visual, cognitive metaphor: ''Faces are just masks Masking colors of a heart'' of a wonderful poem..10++

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