Thursday, September 7, 2006

Faces In The Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

I look up at the sky,
through a little gap in my eye lids.
Obsevering the clouds,
looking for faces of happy kids.
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David Darbyshire
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Nalini Hebbar 07 September 2006

looking over us...feel safe...love...nalini

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Ashish R 07 September 2006

Something i used to do when i was kid.Trying to find faces in the clouds. Gud one. Ashish.

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Steve Hagget 07 September 2006

really goog poem this, David - great images to look for and expertly penned as ever, Steve

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Kee Thampi 07 September 2006

I love this mettled poem with real tune love to watch the clouds float by, how all the faces get there, I wonder why. I think they are up there looking down at us, making

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Lynda Robson 07 September 2006

How observant of you Dave, and do they keep you out of trouble? Sweet poem, love Lynda xx

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