Monday, June 1, 2015

Faceless Face Comments

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Facilitation is being made in a train journey,
Faceless face we fetch that gives pleasure or agony.
Facial action indicates the thoughts of heart,
Face is mirror of heart, it shows murk or smart.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Aniruddha Pathak 01 July 2019

Full of philosophy of life. In a train journey we meet faceless faces, unknown, but by the time we or they get down the faces are quite familiar. A newly born also meets with faceless faces in the same way.

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Pushpendra Patel 12 February 2019

Fearfulness is known from a beautiful face. A person should remain fearless. You are very right sir. This poem started with F has nice effect.

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Simone Inez Harriman 01 October 2017

This poem is truly noble works. A feast of guidance for spiritual enlightenment presented with clever use of alliteration.10+

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Hazel Durham 20 December 2016

To be kind in a world that can be cruel is a blessing of God's guidance to leave a trail of compassion and love for peace will be our reward. Brilliant write and love the title of the poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 June 2015

Finalization of life is coming soon! So, let us all be straight and live in peace.

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Valsa George 07 June 2015

Fight should be ignored peace should be accepted, Filth should be given up morality should be adopted. Finalization of life is coming soon and soon, Fairly we should pray God to receive his boon.............Yes, war and cruelty should be abandoned and peace should be embraced..... Our life on Earth is not to last for ever. The inevitable end will come...! We should store enough imperishable wealth while living to make us worthy of God's kingdom and its bliss!

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 June 2015

A Beautiful poem with philosophical touch guiding our life towards a beautiful journey. Very true said, we must prepare for future by praying God. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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Queeny Gona 02 June 2015

Philosophical read Sir. I liked the way poem has been rendered to convey the message in modest way!

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Kelly Kurt 01 June 2015

F'n good poem my friend. (that slang is funny in the states) As always, a marvelous bit of philosophy. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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