Wednesday, December 28, 2016

Faceless Enemy Comments

Rating: 5.0

You chased me like a cheetah in the wilderness
And passed your minutes in bitterness
Only to assault my young heart
And to see my young soul hurt
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Mariah Ali
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Chinedu Dike 13 March 2017

Beautiful rendition of words embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful motivational piece elegantly brought forth from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Mariah. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 January 2017

To hurt my young soul. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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