Monday, March 22, 2010

Face To Face Comments

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Face to face;
I see your eyes are glowing red.
As blood runs in your veins,
It turns into black.
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Jann Aquarius
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shakequill usher 22 March 2010

I've noticed that you used (this shadows) instead of (these shadows) is there a reason? (you are a thick skinned creature) so good.

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