Face In The Sky Asking Why Comments

if protection was to be used-lovemaking would not be abused. this was the face in the sky asking 'why.'? beautiful poem with deep meaning... i loved it.... read mine dark clouds..... dark clouds

An amazing poetic vision. Your title is especially eye-catching and appealing. Kind regards, Sandra

Wonderful poem using wonderful imagery!

Great write! Divinely intervened words for sure. I have one suggestion that you may have already heard from others? May want to prase your poem in paragraph form. It makes it easier to read, more of a flow. And I had found myself losing that when I was reading your fantastic poem. I almost felt like I had missed the next word that rhymed with the last one said. Re-read what you've written and if it is hard for you to read smoothly, then it is also to the readers. This poem is to beautiful to waiste on losing ones place. God Bless, Linda

Very different I like this you wrote this very well.. Great Job Louis Krista