Monday, November 24, 2008

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Rating: 4.9

The world
On its shimmering beauty
Of all its members
All unique and equal
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Min Sia
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Reina Lorenzo 04 December 2008

i can feel this piece of yours, well penned.. keep it up! !

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 04 December 2008

all unique and equal- that was excellent=10

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Josephine J.W 27 November 2008

Very thoughtful and interesting...I like it!

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Reshma Ramesh 26 November 2008

thiught provoking and an interesting write...well penned

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Pooja Ladyluck 25 November 2008

interesting.........gud 1..........thanx! ! !

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Kim Dang 25 November 2008

I like it. =) Good job!

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Blue Eyes 24 November 2008

wow, what an excelent poem! i love the ideas ''theme of it''

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Mine Yours 24 November 2008

i love it, it includes all the thing that i love best.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 November 2008

Really a thoughtful poem written by princess Min! ! ! Dawn and dusk circling here! 10+++++

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Naru Kaede 24 November 2008

Wow, wow, wow, wow, , , Cool... piece of peace... hope this world can be something better in future, lets pray... Naru Kaede, ,

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Herbert Nehrlich1 24 November 2008

Much truth here but the poem is a trifle bland. H

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Ency Bearis 24 November 2008

speaks of great selected words..powerful and well expressed..nicely written.. Ency Bearis

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Kesav Easwaran 24 November 2008

people pray, for they speak all these sinful words...good poem, Min...i liked the inquisitiveness you bring into this write...lament of an uncompromising young good mind...10

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Chris Bradshaw 24 November 2008

There's courage in your work. Keep it up.

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Homen Thangjam 24 November 2008

We plead for a little bit of responsibility and concern. A universal theme - nicely expressed.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 24 November 2008

deep thought, well done, thanks for sharing

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