Night unveiled the quantum mysteries.
All the conspiracy plaited in the series.
He knew there was no other way round,
Injected the bullets with safest sound.
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ur an excellent poetess as you must have read MY MOMS SMILES AND MOTHERS DAY TODAY CAN YOU TRANSLATE THE POEMS I AM COMING OUT WITH A SPECIAL TRIBUTE ON HER 50TH DEATH ANNIVERSARY KINDLY OBLIGE THANKS IN ADVANCE
=Perhaps the same drops holds the lives of many- indicates the drop of blood of savior! nice writings
Stop war, stop terrorism, stop violence......why kill the son of a great mother? what benefit one gets by killing somebody? All these questions have been beautifully answered in your touching poem....great write..
Quite a disturbing question which let the readers think and ponder about the fragility of life. Compliments for writing such a sensitive poem.
Whoever could think that violence and bloodshed could be the part of night’s quantum mysteries but you have created a connection deep and valid. While our mind ponders over deeper problems underlying human nature our heart gets filled with grief and sadness for human suffering resulting from senseless violence. Good to read you after a long time Geetha.
Thank you so much Savita for commenting on my poem and for your time.
That first line was so utterly beautiful- -]Night unveiled the quantum mysteries. Then I read the second line and my heart faltered at the word conspiracies. Then the third line and my heart stuttered and plummeted with the next line. This is how to handle the progression of a poem, my dear Geetha, and this is how to draw forth sorrow and deep concern and condemnation about the worldwide violence. 10++++++++ and onto my fav list
Thank you so much Susan for reviewing my poem in deep as well as adding to your fav list. Thanks for your time!
Very nicely said a dolorous content....your words force me to find an answer....but it is difficult...never ending prayer alone from all parts of the world can help...the way you have questioned adds to the depth of the content...the format adds to the beauty of the poem...kudos Geetha
We all have similar soul inside our bodies and we all have similar dress of body, why to separate us in the name of God who creatd all of us with a heart of love and the similar passion running in our veins and arttreys as the red blood. A poem with an universal appeal.
very beautifully put across a poets version of life and death over which no one has any control well done poet
A vivid and heart-rending depiction on terrorism has been made by you astutely. I quote... Mother weaves dreams for her only son, Was his fate meant to end somewhere else? Thanks for sharing.10
armor of trust and belief and belief in one God may be the great armor, great write, thanks for sharing the poem with us
Dearth of love, violence galore!