Saturday, June 16, 2018

Fabric Of Armour! Comments

Rating: 4.6

Night unveiled the quantum mysteries.
All the conspiracy plaited in the series.
He knew there was no other way round,
Injected the bullets with safest sound.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Khairul Ahsan 15 August 2018

Dearth of love, violence galore!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 July 2018

ur an excellent poetess as you must have read MY MOMS SMILES AND MOTHERS DAY TODAY CAN YOU TRANSLATE THE POEMS I AM COMING OUT WITH A SPECIAL TRIBUTE ON HER 50TH DEATH ANNIVERSARY KINDLY OBLIGE THANKS IN ADVANCE

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 July 2018

=Perhaps the same drops holds the lives of many- indicates the drop of blood of savior! nice writings

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Kishore Kumar Das 04 July 2018

Stop war, stop terrorism, stop violence......why kill the son of a great mother? what benefit one gets by killing somebody? All these questions have been beautifully answered in your touching poem....great write..

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 July 2018

Thank you so much Sir!

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Aarzoo Mehek 01 July 2018

Quite a disturbing question which let the readers think and ponder about the fragility of life. Compliments for writing such a sensitive poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 July 2018

Thank you so much Aarzoo!

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Savita Tyagi 30 June 2018

Whoever could think that violence and bloodshed could be the part of night’s quantum mysteries but you have created a connection deep and valid. While our mind ponders over deeper problems underlying human nature our heart gets filled with grief and sadness for human suffering resulting from senseless violence. Good to read you after a long time Geetha.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 July 2018

Thank you so much Savita for commenting on my poem and for your time.

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Susan Williams 21 June 2018

That first line was so utterly beautiful- -]Night unveiled the quantum mysteries. Then I read the second line and my heart faltered at the word conspiracies. Then the third line and my heart stuttered and plummeted with the next line. This is how to handle the progression of a poem, my dear Geetha, and this is how to draw forth sorrow and deep concern and condemnation about the worldwide violence. 10++++++++ and onto my fav list

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 June 2018

Thank you so much Susan for reviewing my poem in deep as well as adding to your fav list. Thanks for your time!

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Indira Renganathan 19 June 2018

Very nicely said a dolorous content....your words force me to find an answer....but it is difficult...never ending prayer alone from all parts of the world can help...the way you have questioned adds to the depth of the content...the format adds to the beauty of the poem...kudos Geetha

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 June 2018

Thank you Indira ji for the inspiring comment.

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Akhtar Jawad 18 June 2018

We all have similar soul inside our bodies and we all have similar dress of body, why to separate us in the name of God who creatd all of us with a heart of love and the similar passion running in our veins and arttreys as the red blood. A poem with an universal appeal.

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 June 2018

Thank you so much Akhtar ji.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 June 2018

very beautifully put across a poets version of life and death over which no one has any control well done poet

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 June 2018

Thank you so much Poet!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 June 2018

A vivid and heart-rending depiction on terrorism has been made by you astutely. I quote... Mother weaves dreams for her only son, Was his fate meant to end somewhere else? Thanks for sharing.10

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 June 2018

Thanks a lot Sir!

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Muzahidul Reza 18 June 2018

armor of trust and belief and belief in one God may be the great armor, great write, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 June 2018

Thank you so much for the beautiful comment.

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