Sunday, June 26, 2011

Fa01 Enemy Within Comments

Rating: 5.0

all of us desire happiness
in every possible degree
to our own selfish craving
which lead to laws to abide
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Manonton Dalan
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Great poem. I was impressed. It was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A dream of the judgement day' on page 1. Best regards Akmal

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