Νυχτερινή Χιονόπτωση [ F.Frosini: Nocturnal Snowing] Comments
''Ας πέσει τo χνουδάτο τούτο χιόνι
στα όνειρά μας επάνω, να τα κάνει να λάμψουν''.
Απελευθερώσου.
Η ανάσα σου λειαίνει αμετάθετους ουρανούς,
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Excellent translation! Interesting choice of wording! Wonderful poem! I liked it! As well, as the other versions!
Dimitrios Galanis To μετέφρασα στις 5-9 Ιαν.2016.Ελπίζω να ακούγεται και στον έλληνα αναγνώστη πάρα πολύ ωραίο.Πιο εύκολα θα το νοιώσει κανείς αν λάβει υπόψη του και τα σχόλια στην αγγλική εκδοχή του ποιητή.[poemhunter.com/Fabrizio Frosini Nocturnal Snowing] ΄Ενας διάλογος με μνήμες του παρελθόντος, σκέψεις και όνειρα του παρόντος, υποσυνείδητα κι ασυνείδητα να εναλλάσσονται στα όνειρα και τη σκέψη του ποιητή, ένα αμφίσημο πολλών εκδοχών και ερμηνειών ποίημα που σαγηνεύει με την πολυδιάστατη, ανισόπεδη κατανομή των προεκτάσεών του.//Σου παραθέτω εδώ το σχόλιό μου σε άλλη δημοσίευσή του για να καταλάβεις ότι πράγματι είναι ένα δύσκολο ποίημα.Ευχαριστώ για την καλοσύνη σου και τον καλό σου λόγο.
and please, extend my thanks to your daughter, also, for her kindness in reading and praise my poem
******************************************************************************* My words about being no reason to look for Vitti or others, refers to the fact that I trust you. I've translated - into my native language - poems written by other authors, and I know 'first hand' that choosing the right words to make the original meaning (or what I 'feel' that an 'original meaning' can be) in a different language, is - quite often - not so easy. For such a reason I try to put myself into thinking to be translating my own poetry.. this means paying much attention not to be sloppy, so to respect another author's work. And I think that this is what you have done, translating my poetry. Right? :) *******************************************************************************
Whenever I do read it in my translation I do assure myself that it is a great poem of yours, dear Fabrizio.May be one of the greatest.I can not believe too that I have done so good a translation too.
:) no, no reason to look for Mondiano or Vitti, dear Dimitrios
as I told you previoulsy, it's a pity I can't understand Greek.. but it is nice seeing my poetry translated in a language that means so much to our common civilization..
If you would be in the temptetion to see it in google's automatic translation, let me say that I had tried it quite a lot of times, but I concluded that it is only right in 20 cases out of a hundred.
I do not know whether Mario Vitti is still living.He was professor in Tusca uni. of Viterbo.He is an expert on new greek poetry.Perhaps you could come in touch with him.Send him my translations of your poems and let him you know whether my translations are good ones.
another poem of mine translated in your native language! wow.. Thank you, my friend. I'd say that it is a remarkably achivement, Dimitrios, because my poem is not an easy one.. :)
In my greek, dear Fabrizio, it keeps all its meaning found by commentators in it.It seems to balance upon certain and uncertain ambiguities, ambivalances or doubtfulness.Conscious and subconscious hints are also left to be meant.I think You should come in contact with the professor of Palermo Mondiano who is an expert on new greek poetry and ask his opinion about my translations of your poems.
Let's drop to plush it snow in our dreams up, make them shine. '' Release. The breath your softens staunch heavens.. Very amazing expression of love and pain in this poem that speaks about secrets of expression. Fantastic sharing.10
My own is a translation of F.Frosini's Nocturnal Snowing.A poem he has also in Italian composed.Which one have you, dear Kumarmani, read?
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7/22/2025 11:08:29 AM # 1.0.0
Πολύ καλό Δημήτρη! Μπράβο σου! Πάντα τέτοια!
Aυτό, αγαπητή Σοφία, ήταν αρκετά δύσκολο.Χρειάστηκε να διαβάσω όλα τα σχόλια της αγγλικής και της ιταλλικής εκδοχής και να ζητήσω και τη βοήθεια του ίδιου του Φαμπριτσιο.Αν διαβάσεις και το σχόλιό μου στο σχόλιο της Λελουδιάς θα καταλάβεις καλλίτερα γιατί ήταν δύσκολο.Από το όνειρο στην πραγματικότητα, από το συνειδητό στις ασύνειδες επιρροές, πολυεπίπεδο.Ευχαριστώ πού για το καλό σου λόγο.