Thursday, September 21, 2006

(f) 5 (Haiku) Color Triku Comments

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Clouds fill up the sky
Vivid blue becomes dark grey
The sky starts to cry
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Geoff Warden 21 September 2006

T.O. what kinda passion is in this poem...natures kiss after a rain...... and your words have chased all the gray away..........Great rite....

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Ernestine Northover 21 September 2006

These are lovely TO a beautiful read, and very well presented. Love and hugs Ernestine

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Duncan Wyllie 21 September 2006

A poem full of contrasting hues and that beautiful rainbow of hope at the end so wonderful to see Love duncan X

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