Face cloth in one hand
and with the other
eyeliner goes to her
magical eyes.
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Nimal, it seems to me I've been out of the loop so long that I missed it when you changed your style. Growth is good and seems to have done you well. A+!
I'm rarely lost for words. Here, I can say merely that this is, to me, a perfect piece. t x
This is a wonderful piece my friend. You capture a fleeting moment, within the narrative, and expand on it so beautifully.
Provocative title. Your poem speaks volumes in a very few words. Charming but also a bit vulnerable too. Sandra
In a few words you manage to say much. I love your work. Hope I can read all of it some time soon.