Tuesday, March 1, 2016

Eyesight Failing ….. [temporary? Eye Problem; Personal; Short; Humor? ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

Two months or more ago "she" said: "Your eyes aren't good".
I ignored "her" ….AND the bodies piling up …on our car's hood.
After all, I got no tickets, and we got where we were going.
I thought something ELSE caused her "hot air" ……to be blowing.
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Bri Edwards
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Wes Vogler 10 March 2016

No big deal Bri... I have operated on one eye since birth and it is still serving me very well after 85 years The left one stays closed a lot.

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Valsa George 09 March 2016

A Wife is sensible most of the time, so better pay heed to her advice! ..................................................' BUT I have ANOTHER EYE, so ……..if one shuts down completely; I'll try NOT to cry.' A very nonchalant attitude! (So at times, there is some truth in what you say)

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Brian Mayo 01 March 2016

Well-constructed and written with humor. Nice job.

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Eugene Levich 01 March 2016

Don't let my wife hear you say that! Anyway, I'm glad you're back in the poetry business. If you wore an eye patch you'd look like Captain Kidd.

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Kelly Kurt 01 March 2016

Yeah, they can be sensible at times. : -)

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