Friday, February 10, 2006

Eyes Watching In The Dark Comments

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Eyes watching in the dark, eye-balls
Rolling in my mind, asleep
I see owls glide through dusty halls
Where bodies hang from beams:
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Tan Pratonix
dark dying
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Alison Cassidy 13 May 2006

This works well - strong evocative imagery. I particularly liked the line 'eyeballs rolling in my mind'. Alison

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Julia Klimenova 10 February 2006

Scary and bloodthirsty. I wonder, what would Freud say to this? :)

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Triolet, Mauritius
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Triolet, Mauritius
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