Eyes Sparkle Comments

very on it randle null2 minutes ago I like the last paragraph

I love it! Monterio Hill33 minutes ago Very superb writing my friend. Comment +1

Good Harish Bhardwaj33 minutes ago Ovel all its a good poem for the kid and the grown up too. This poem gives the real picture about the childrens during their vacations. loved reading it Comment +1

there is a question, what sparkles now, the eyes? didn't flow right along. James Powell28 minutes ago I feel it was over with from the moment it began. we rejoice with what? I feel the author is trying to rhyme words that shouldn't be in the poem in the first place.

The very short span of life is not spend it stresses and strains but a little happiness with the family, children, and friends a nice idea. A beautiful and meaningful poem and thought is highlighted.

Now the vacation is on The children are at home