Tuesday, March 21, 2017

Eyes Reflecting Violence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Theres been a rumour hidden here
That truth can spring from eyes,
The soulful look of a tempered girl
I saw beauty when she cried
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Daniel Peter Jones
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Chinedu Dike 04 April 2018

A well texted and nicely thought-out poem. An interesting narrative, highly relatable and very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing Daniel.

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Jean Harold 24 March 2017

Another poem about hollow girl. I love how you point it out for the rest of us

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Richard Wlodarski 24 March 2017

This is truly a profound poem about domestic violence. It shows so much empathy. Very worthy of more than a 10.

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Daniel Jones 24 March 2017

What a beautiful comment, thanks for your time in reading and commenting, i appreciate your words.

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