Saturday, October 17, 2015

Eyes Of Storm Comments

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Your love has the tragic eyes of a storm,
That never care to look back
To the destruction
It has caused to my fragile earth.
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Sanjukta Nag
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Edward Kofi Louis 18 October 2015

With grayish clouds of desolation. With the muse of the mind and the heart under the scars of life. Nice work.

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Valsa George 18 October 2015

Sanjukta...... poetry is in your life blood! You have presented the heart ache and the indignation over a love that after giving promises failed to fulfill those promises! You have been able to preserve the image of a destructive wild wind that uprooted the green forest of promises and a cloudy sky that darkened your world! Great write!

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Rajnish Manga 17 October 2015

There is a fascinating appeal in these protestations of a loving heart which is now a victim of betrayal. Immaculate representation of an emotional disposition. Thanks. Those eyes always fail to witness The uprooted evergreen forest of promises

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Loke Kok Yee 17 October 2015

So sad but so beautifully written. Thanks-10

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M Asim Nehal 17 October 2015

Outstanding poem...on this subject....Loved it. Those eyes always fail to witness The uprooted evergreen forest of promises Once you had planted for us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 October 2015

Sad and Touching. So nice.

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