Eyes Of Storm Comments

With grayish clouds of desolation. With the muse of the mind and the heart under the scars of life. Nice work.

Sanjukta...... poetry is in your life blood! You have presented the heart ache and the indignation over a love that after giving promises failed to fulfill those promises! You have been able to preserve the image of a destructive wild wind that uprooted the green forest of promises and a cloudy sky that darkened your world! Great write!

There is a fascinating appeal in these protestations of a loving heart which is now a victim of betrayal. Immaculate representation of an emotional disposition. Thanks. Those eyes always fail to witness The uprooted evergreen forest of promises

So sad but so beautifully written. Thanks-10

Outstanding poem...on this subject....Loved it. Those eyes always fail to witness The uprooted evergreen forest of promises Once you had planted for us.

Sad and Touching. So nice.